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Homework or Stresswork? by Hamish

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  1. Lucy

    I liked your title and you have good points

  2. Conor f

    I like that it is very detailed and the writing is very neat

  3. Nicole

    You made very good points and I enjoyed reading it

  4. Lorenzo

    I think the title is very good and it is a very good opinion from both sides

  5. Anonymous

    I like the way u layed the paragraphs out and everything was good

  6. Grace

    I really liked your work I could understand it very well.

  7. admin

    Thanks for submitting this piece on homework Hamish. It was good to see that you included the 4 paragraphs stating the issue, your opinion, the opposing opinion and a possible solution.

    I especially like your title, ‘Homework or Stresswork?’.
    Your paragraph 3 is especially convincing to the reader, no alone have you made very good points but you have backed it up with statistics from renowned universities.

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