Fantastic report Hamish. I really like the use of vocabulary such as ‘ whether or not’, ‘however’ and ‘scheduled’. Your opening paragraph is a really good summary of the events also.
To work on for your next report – To make your report stand out from the rest, try to think of another part of the story that a reader might be interested in and go into more detail on that e.g. turf cutters, Blessington people at the funeral etc.
Fantastic report Hamish. I really like the use of vocabulary such as ‘ whether or not’, ‘however’ and ‘scheduled’. Your opening paragraph is a really good summary of the events also.
To work on for your next report – To make your report stand out from the rest, try to think of another part of the story that a reader might be interested in and go into more detail on that e.g. turf cutters, Blessington people at the funeral etc.