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The Caveman of Mayo by Jack

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  1. Daniela

    nice ! your headline is great, same with all the report. good work 👏👏

  2. Donagh

    Brilliant report Jack, I thought your headline was very good.I love the way you came up with The Caveman of Mayo,it got me straight into it.But altogether it was brilliant.

  3. Donagh

    Brilliant report Jack,I thought your headline was very good.I love the way you came up with The Caveman of Mayo,it got me straight into it. Altogether I thought it was brilliant.

  4. Emily Ward

    Very well written report, concise and to the point. I love the little graphic at the end. Perhaps you could try finishing on a punchier sentence or rounding up the piece in the closing sentence.

  5. admin

    Excellent report Jack. Your headline straight away got my attention and your opening paragraph gave a great summary of what happened. One thing to remember is to put the day before the date eg. Saturday the 17th of September.

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